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enough background to understand the other chapters? Does each chapter make
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enough background to understand the other chapters? Does each chapter make
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it clear what work and analyses I have done? Do the figures clearly communicate
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it clear what work and analyses I have done? Do the figures clearly communicate
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the results I'm trying to show? Do you feel that the claims in the results
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the results I'm trying to show? Do you feel that the claims in the results
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- and discussion sections are well-supported? Additionally, while I am well
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- aware that Chapter 1 (the introduction) contains many un-cited claims,
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- all the other chapters (2,3, and 4)
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+ and discussion sections are well-supported? There's no need to suggest
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+ improvements; just note areas that you feel need improvement.
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+ Additionally, while I am well aware that Chapter 1 (the introduction) contains
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+ many un-cited claims, all the other chapters (2,3, and 4)
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\emph on
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be fully cited.
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be fully cited.
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So if you notice any un-cited claims in those chapters, please flag them
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So if you notice any un-cited claims in those chapters, please flag them
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for my attention.
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for my attention.
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+ Similarly, if you discover any factual errors, please note them as well.
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\begin_layout Standard
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