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- [ ] Time was around 40 minutes, so add at least 5 minutes of content
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+* Notes from Sabah
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+- [X] Slide 1: Is the title final? If not, would adjust to (also note
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+ space in title slide for bioinformaticsanalysis) "Bioinformatic
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+ analysis of genomic and epigenomic data in the context of CD4+T-cell
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+ differentiation and diagnosis and treatment of transplant rejection"
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+- [X] Slide with organ bar chart: Adjust title to 'Organ donation
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+ statistics for the USA in 2018', remove from bottom and make image
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+ itself bigger
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+- [ ] What's the connection between organ transplant, graft rejection,
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+ and immune response? Make that clear in the transition between
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+ slides. We now want to know about graft rejection because.... why?
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+ what about what we just learned with the organ transplants directly
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+ connects?
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+- [ ] Condense these bullet points. The previous set of bullet points
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+ is a perfect example of spacing and length readable in a short
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+ amount of time for the audience
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+- [ ] More time on allografting and less time on graft rejection. What
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+ is it? How does it work? Provide a brief example/image right before
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+ the chart
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+- [ ] Rejection and immmuno suppressive drugs -- this is a great
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+ transition (well explained) but again the bullet points need to be
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+ condensed. Bring in an image with these as well to give the audience
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+ 'a visual break' before you intro your topics
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+- [ ] I like the update to thesis topics. I would adjust such that 'my
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+ thesis topics' is replaced with the overarching question you want to
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+ answer for these 3 topics and make that the heading.
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+- [ ] Then, introduce the 3 topics in the next slide (blue font of
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+ topic 1, 2... etc)
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+- [ ] Then, introduce the additional text for each topic in the next
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+ slide
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+- [ ] I like what you did with the font. It's more balanced now and
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+ reads as one composed slide
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+- [ ] You have the 'memory cells' slides repeated 4x, and I see that
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+ you're highlighting different sections each time. Pair the heading
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+ to match with this (what you want to say in each as the take-home) >
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+ having the same heading repeated
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* Useful links
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- https://pandoc.org/MANUAL.html#speaker-notes
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