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Ryan C. Thompson 6 年之前
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thesis.lyx

@@ -889,8 +889,21 @@ In the context of a pathogenic infection, immune memory is a major advantage,
  are still poorly understood.
  are still poorly understood.
  In order to develop methods of immune suppression that either prevent the
  In order to develop methods of immune suppression that either prevent the
  formation of memory cells or work more effectively against memory cells,
  formation of memory cells or work more effectively against memory cells,
- the mechanisms of immune memory formation and regulation must be better
- understood.
+ we require a more complete understanding of the mechanisms of immune memory
+ formation and regulation.
+\end_layout
+
+\begin_layout Standard
+\begin_inset Flex TODO Note (inline)
+status open
+
+\begin_layout Plain Layout
+Some kind of transition into bioinformatics would be good here
+\end_layout
+
+\end_inset
+
+
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 \end_layout
 
 
 \begin_layout Subsection
 \begin_layout Subsection
@@ -902,8 +915,7 @@ Overview of bioinformatic analysis methods
 status open
 status open
 
 
 \begin_layout Plain Layout
 \begin_layout Plain Layout
-Also cite: R, Bioconductor, snakemake, python, pandas, bedtools, bowtie2,
- hisat2, STAR, samtools, sra-toolkit, picard tools
+Also cite somewhere: R, Bioconductor
 \end_layout
 \end_layout
 
 
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