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@@ -772,11 +771,15 @@ Obviously the abstract gets written last.
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Thank you so much for agreeing to read my thesis and give me feedback on
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it.
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What you are currently reading is a rough draft, in need of many revisions.
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Don't worry about keeping up with the updates.
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As for what feedback I'm looking for, first of all, don't waste your time
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marking spelling mistakes and such.
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I haven't run a spell checker on it yet, so let me worry about that.
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@@ -806,7 +809,7 @@ As for what feedback I'm looking for, first of all, don't waste your time
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that as well.
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Beyond that, what I'm mainly interested in is feedback on the content.
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For example: does the introduction flow logically, and does it provide
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enough background to understand the other chapters? Does each chapter make
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Similarly, if you discover any factual errors, please note them as well.
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You can provide your feedback in whatever way is most convenient to you.
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You could mark up this PDF with highlights and notes, then send it back
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to me.
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of it, and there's no need to comment on it.
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My thesis is due Thursday, October 10th, so in order to be useful to me,
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I'll need your feedback at least several days before that, ideally by Monday,
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October 7th.
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Just let me know.
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Thanks again for your help, and happy reading!
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