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 Links: <a href="http://bioconductor.org/packages/release/bioc/html/BiocParallel.html">BiocParallel</a>, <a href="http://bioconductor.org/packages/release/bioc/html/ChIPpeakAnno.html">ChIPPeakAnno</a>, <a href="http://bioconductor.org/packages/release/bioc/html/mygene.html">MyGene</a>, <a href="https://support.bioconductor.org/u/5618/">Support Profile</a></li>
-<li class="itemize_item">Mentored 2 coworkers in learning bioinformatics.</li>
+<li class="itemize_item">Mentored 2 coworkers in learning bioinformatics, one from a programming background and the other from a biology background.</li>
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 <div class="subsection"><a id='magicparlabel-33' /><span class="subsection_label"></span> Summer Internship, Informatics IT, Merck &amp; Co. Boston, MA&emsp;&emsp; 2011</div>
 
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 Links: <a href="http://genomes.sdsc.edu/downloads/deloxer/index.html">Documentation</a>; <a href="https://darwinawardwinner.github.io/resume/examples/Gaasterland/delox.R.html">Code</a></li>
-<li class="itemize_item">Performed a molecular genetics study to find potential causal mutations for <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Black_rhinoceros#Threats">fatal iron overload disease</a> in critically endangered black rhinoceros by <em>de novo</em> assembly of black rhino transcriptome using Trinity and comparison to closely-related white rhino transcriptome. Developed a custom pipeline to match up ortholog gene pairs, discover single-nucleotide differences between them, and functionally annotate these differences, and delivered a list of potential causal variants to collaborators for follow-up. 
+<li class="itemize_item">Performed a molecular genetics study to find potential causal mutations for <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Black_rhinoceros#Threats">fatal iron overload disease</a> in critically endangered black rhinoceros by <em>de novo</em> assembly of transcriptomes for black rhino and closely-related white rhino. Developed a custom pipeline to match up ortholog gene pairs, discover single-nucleotide differences between them, and functionally annotate these differences, and delivered a list of potential causal variants to collaborators for follow-up. 
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 Link: <a href="https://darwinawardwinner.github.io/resume/examples/Gaasterland/ipi-results-small.txt">Example results</a></li>

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-Mentored 2 coworkers in learning bioinformatics.
+Mentored 2 coworkers in learning bioinformatics, one from a programming
+ background and the other from a biology background.
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- assembly of black rhino transcriptome using Trinity and comparison to closely-r
-elated white rhino transcriptome.
+ assembly of transcriptomes for black rhino and closely-related white rhino.
  Developed a custom pipeline to match up ortholog gene pairs, discover single-nu
 cleotide differences between them, and functionally annotate these differences,
  and delivered a list of potential causal variants to collaborators for

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@@ -85,7 +85,8 @@ Contact: Dr. Andrew Su, asu@scripps.edu
   data.
 * Active member of the Bioconductor community and contributing
   developer for several Bioconductor packages.
-* Mentored 2 coworkers in learning bioinformatics.
+* Mentored 2 coworkers in learning bioinformatics, one from a
+  programming background and the other from a biology background.
 
 Summer Internship, Informatics IT, Merck & Co.
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@@ -114,12 +115,12 @@ Contact: Terry Gaasterland, gaasterland@ucsd.edu
   world.
 * Performed a molecular genetics study to find potential causal
   mutations for fatal iron overload disease in critically endangered
-  black rhinoceros by de novo assembly of black rhino transcriptome
-  using Trinity and comparison to closely-related white rhino
-  transcriptome. Developed a custom pipeline to match up ortholog gene
-  pairs, discover single-nucleotide differences between them, and
-  functionally annotate these differences, and delivered a list of
-  potential causal variants to collaborators for follow-up.
+  black rhinoceros by de novo assembly of transcriptomes for black
+  rhino and closely-related white rhino. Developed a custom pipeline
+  to match up ortholog gene pairs, discover single-nucleotide
+  differences between them, and functionally annotate these
+  differences, and delivered a list of potential causal variants to
+  collaborators for follow-up.
 * Helped design & implement a large-scale high-throughput exome
   sequencing pipeline for SNP discovery and functional annotation,
   including QC and validation of on-target coverage depth and